I commented on Amanda Griffith and Tomoko Uehara first drafts.
I learned that my first draft was not filled with enough information to make a good argument for my first draft. They both got started off good and I hope to see the finished product. I would like to spend a lot more time writing my finish paper. It needs to be more interesting for my attended audience.
Kelesia Bomar reviewed my research paper and did a good job. I appreciate the comments she left and I hope to further explain more on my topic for my next draft. Looks like I need to invest more time in researching my subject.
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She reviewed my draft too. She left a lot of good ideas for me to consider as well.
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